It’s like being spit out of an abyss,
because you’re even darker that its walls,
it’s silent and it’s dead,
then you feel a warm breeze kissing what’s left off of you,
the parts you’re trying to keep from the hopeless frost of a dying love,
it sneaks within your skin, and starts to ignite your soul again,
you remember that there were wings somewhere your back,
once upon a time,
you think that maybe it’s time to move your body,
back to the fetal position,
to the pose that makes you feel a lil safer,
but it is still too soon to open your eyes.
You just fumble away, searching forms in the dark,
it is not a warrant that something will be there,
but you won’t let the flame of hope die....
It is her face the first thing you see after this coal sleep in a void bed,
this unexistence carved in your soul for so long,
that her shine makes you feel like you’re been swallowed by the sunset,
every part of you comes back to breathing, in a painful pleasure rite,
joy rides you again, and tears fall as you became aware of life,
and life recognizes one of its sons who was missing for a moment,
you could kneel before her,
you could tell her how grateful you are,
but it is nothing compare to the feeling,
of being whole,
as you dive into her arms . . .
Julian R. Knihs Lizard Johnny - 7-11-2003 at 02:41 PM
I've written a poem too, but it's german.........erm, no not german, in Vienna dialect, you won't understand it!Planet Girl - 7-11-2003 at 03:45 PM
JayRob
As always very nice.
PG
:angel: * The Witch * - 7-11-2003 at 05:18 PM
Wow, you are getting better.
Keep writing, more more more...
*waits for more* JayRob - 7-14-2003 at 06:09 AM
Tks PG, LJ and Gina !
Hoy Johnny, try to translate it to english and put it here !
Ich spreche deutsch ! (a lil bit !)
JRobertoLizard Johnny - 7-15-2003 at 05:55 AM
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Originally posted by JayRob
Tks PG, LJ and Gina !
Hoy Johnny, try to translate it to english and put it here !
Ich spreche deutsch ! (a lil bit !)
JRoberto
I'll give my best to translate it, but my english isn't very good.
keek on writin' you're very talented!sexualpanther3 - 7-15-2003 at 06:52 PM
im not a big fan of poetry, but that was touching. very nicely done - did u come up with that or did u get it from somewhere?JayRob - 7-16-2003 at 06:07 AM
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Originally posted by sexualpanther3
im not a big fan of poetry, but that was touching. very nicely done - did u come up with that or did u get it from somewhere?
