JayRob
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The Sun of Ressurrection (Poem)
The Sun of Ressurrection
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It’s like being spit out of an abyss,
because you’re even darker that its walls,
it’s silent and it’s dead,
then you feel a warm breeze kissing what’s left off of you,
the parts you’re trying to keep from the hopeless frost of a dying love,
it sneaks within your skin, and starts to ignite your soul again,
you remember that there were wings somewhere your back,
once upon a time,
you think that maybe it’s time to move your body,
back to the fetal position,
to the pose that makes you feel a lil safer,
but it is still too soon to open your eyes.
You just fumble away, searching forms in the dark,
it is not a warrant that something will be there,
but you won’t let the flame of hope die....
It is her face the first thing you see after this coal sleep in a void bed,
this unexistence carved in your soul for so long,
that her shine makes you feel like you’re been swallowed by the sunset,
every part of you comes back to breathing, in a painful pleasure rite,
joy rides you again, and tears fall as you became aware of life,
and life recognizes one of its sons who was missing for a moment,
you could kneel before her,
you could tell her how grateful you are,
but it is nothing compare to the feeling,
of being whole,
as you dive into her arms . . .
Julian R. Knihs
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Lizard Johnny
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I've written a poem too, but it's german.........erm, no not german, in Vienna dialect, you won't understand it!
Burnin' down the night, set the world aliiiiiiiiight YEAH!
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Planet Girl
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JayRob
As always very nice.
PG
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Come on Baby Lets Get Wrecked Lose What's Left Of Our Self Respect
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* The Witch *
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Wow, you are getting better.
Keep writing, more more more...
*waits for more*
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JayRob
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Tks PG, LJ and Gina ! 
Hoy Johnny, try to translate it to english and put it here !
Ich spreche deutsch ! (a lil bit !)
JRoberto
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Lizard Johnny
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| Quote: | Originally posted by JayRob
Tks PG, LJ and Gina !
Hoy Johnny, try to translate it to english and put it here !
Ich spreche deutsch ! (a lil bit !)
JRoberto |
I'll give my best to translate it, but my english isn't very good.
keek on writin' you're very talented!
Burnin' down the night, set the world aliiiiiiiiight YEAH!
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sexualpanther3
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im not a big fan of poetry, but that was touching. very nicely done - did u come up with that or did u get it from somewhere?
"...., so get on your knees and worship me, worship me." - Black Label Society
"If you really want to commit suicide and you feel that's the only way
out...Try to take someone you hate with you" - Peter Steele
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JayRob
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| Quote: | Originally posted by sexualpanther3
im not a big fan of poetry, but that was touching. very nicely done - did u come up with that or did u get it from somewhere?
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It is mine SP3 , tks for your kind words.
JRoberto
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