JayRob
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With the muses fistfighting inside
With the muses fistfighting inside
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I'm loose now,
loosing up...
Dragonflies bloom from the palm of my hands,
I'm raised up by the flap of their wings,
time spreads and flows through me, like water through a sponge,
please turn off the lights...
I take my position in the promenade down the mile,
but my mind's horses run free in the face of the sun,
earth embraces me with mourning for the fate of its son,
I'll say my rhymes and fall asleep in the green fields of its arms,
unrest, untidy, ... ,
alive...
Julian R. Knihs
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RedVelvet
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That's beautiful, Julian. Makes me think of a certain performer or two, was that your inspiration, or am I way off base here?
Thanks for sharing.
Linda 
WARNING: the crumsumpten of alcahol may Mack you tink you can tipe real gode.
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Planet Girl
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I like it too.
I post to another forum and we have a thread just for members poetry.
I always love reading it, here and there.
Maybe some day I'll post mine here....
Thanks..It was beautiful.
PG
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Come on Baby Lets Get Wrecked Lose What's Left Of Our Self Respect
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Planet Girl
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He said cry
I did
I wanted to die
I did
My heart is yours
too far away many shores
kiss me quick.
he makes me sick
Touch me?
No let me die
Roll aside and let me cry
It hurts, it stings
All theses things
I love you.
always will
Come on Baby Lets Get Wrecked Lose What's Left Of Our Self Respect
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JayRob
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Thanks for the words Ladies !
Linda, you are right, music is always a great source of inspiration to me, specially CULT music !
Planet Girl . . . BEAUTIFUL !!!!
JRoberto
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