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info.gif posted on 4-16-2003 at 09:19 PM
just another poem


falling splendor
tender grass
wind will spin
clouds will pass
here I lay
in sun and shade
sky of turquois
leaves of jade

river sings through
rounded stones
rushing calmly
silv'ry tones
sighing deeply
flirt with sleep
this place a secret
I will keep




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[*] posted on 4-17-2003 at 05:56 AM


Nice Rain, I like the leaves of jade part, It's a nice visual.

Here's one:


She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.
One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
Or softly lightens o'er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.
And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent!




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[*] posted on 4-17-2003 at 07:08 AM


Amy and PG : BEAUTIFUL !!! :)

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cool.gif posted on 4-17-2003 at 01:10 PM


simple


now that's how to lay a poem on me!


:flame:ON!!!


oh and Rain...here's to become you ;)

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wink.gif posted on 4-17-2003 at 09:25 PM


Thanks everyone! I wrote that one last night, just sitting in front of the computer, a little touch of insomnia from a crazy week.

Hi Julian! Hugs to you! Email me :)

Hey Black Angel... ;)




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