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JayRob

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posted on 6-18-2003 at 07:12 AM

Marks (Poem)

Marks
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At the side of the line limiting nowhere,
I planted my heart,
It grew a tree of fragile memories,

the first night under the rain,
watching from the distance the lights in your room go out,

that poem by Yeats saying we should be careful not to step on our dreams,

the empty orchestration wishpered between the walls of these grey towers of concrete and mourning,

I see them shaking in the wind, and I feel myself just as ready to hit the ground,

I hear the clock, it is ticking closer, it is ticking closer , ... ,

but hours won't pass at all .

At the side of the line limiting nowhere,
I see you and me,
in this destination unknown train called us,

with our high hopes,

plastic lives,

and the need to be the same one note on that melody...

Julian R. Knihs

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posted on 6-18-2003 at 10:29 AM

Thx 4 Sharing

Excellent perspective.
Very profound & true.

JayRob

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posted on 6-18-2003 at 01:44 PM

Tks Mike ! JRoberto

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posted on 6-18-2003 at 03:54 PM

good one bro!

:cool:

stay cool!

when kids ask me how does santa clause live forever, i tell them "it's because he drinks blood".

if life deals you lemons, why not go kill someone with the lemons(maybe by shoving them down his throat).

it's too bad that whole families have to be torn apart by something as simple as wild dogs.